My new poem "Winter Blue"???

On Winter's night,


I lied there


alone


cuddled in my sheets,


my head, softly against the pillow,


watching snowflakes fall,


as winter's chill


slowly knocks at my window.





My mind drifted off,


and I dreamed sweet dreams,


dreams thought to be unclear,


but now clearer than ever before,


and suddenly, I understood


life was not meant for being sad.





Suddenly realizing what hit me,


I rose from the comfort of my bed,


drying tears from my eyes,


walking towards my bedroom window.





And as I looked up,


there it was,


a star in the sky,


and as beautiful as it was,


I then realized


that my days would shine brighter


if only I'd learn to smile.

My new poem "Winter Blue"???
What a wonderful, positive message you convey in this lovely poem. The only thing I would change is to use "laid" there in place of "I lied there". That it is such a small criticism reflects the fact that your poem is very well written.
Reply:WOW -man i am impressed .
Reply:Very very nice.