Saturday, November 14, 2009

Women are like sooo sweet !! that's why I love em,, do you like this Poem??

"Snow Falls" tommy_caswell2000@yahoo.com





In the brisk night of winter, snow falls soft and light,


you, soft and silky, warm and clean, wander in night.


Your mind a maze of beauty, your thoughts fall like snow,


clean and white and gentle, you illuminate a peaceful glow.





Snow falls with valor, it piles up and makes a grand presecene.


I awake to hold you close, and snuggle in your aromatic essence.


Drifting off as one together, nature is singing in our quiet merge.





Hoping in our silence, that this moment in time, will only purge.


what is in our heart,, as we share this special gift of care,


snow falls with valor, as we no longer feel lonely despair,





happiness prevails,, if only for the moment,, that "Snow Falls"

Women are like sooo sweet !! that's why I love em,, do you like this Poem??
nice....it rhymes.
Reply:aww i luv it =)
Reply:I got nervous when you said purge.LOL I thought she threw up or something.LOL But I got the point towards the end. I like it. I might ask a question later today. Something to look forward to hummm? Anyway I asked one yesterday so feel free to answer.From your girl cheer beau bre.
Reply:nice
Reply:that is really sweet
Reply:Thanks for your poem. Love is the beautiful state for poetry. 'For god's sake, hold your tongue and let me love' -- Tagore.
Reply:wow thats amazing. i need a someone who would say something like that to me! lol
Reply:Wow, this is beautiful! The language that you use is so vivid and picturesque. You have a real talent for writing. Great job! :)
Reply:yes your so sweet i luv it = )
Reply:thats beautiful!!!!i love it!!!!
Reply:Absolutely exquisite. Did you write it?

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