Monday, May 17, 2010

A poem in need of a title, can you help?

Sweet summer's dew,


Crisp Autumn air,


Soft snow of winter


Beauty of Spring,


Where shall I find you


On this Halloween?





In the dusk of light


Or colors of sunsets


Shall you await me


My noble prince?





Lift not my soul


With your song,


but include harmony


With every verse.





Let sorrow win the day


As stratus fills the heavens


With its own melody.





Note: stratus are a type of cloud that produces the drizzle of rain that last all day.





Please also tell me what you think the poem is saying,


Thanks in advance!

A poem in need of a title, can you help?
That's the beauty of poetry right? There may be myriad of meanings, depending on each individual who reads it. To me it seems as though the author has lost a loved one, to death perhaps, and is mourning him and wants to mourn rather than be uplifted. This of course may be a superficial interpretation...


As for a title, (based on my interpretation) how about "Melancholy Embrace", suggesting the author is feeling sadness and loss and is aware of this and embracing these feelings. Or maybe just "Loss".
Reply:It a good poem the only thing cmoing to mind it a title maybe call it theriors. That all i got.
Reply:Please note that stratus clouds are normally not associated with rain or drizzle.
Reply:Seasons of Shadows and Light


I think this poem is about a love affair with the universe. A


good one.
Reply:this poem is very hot. i think it is talking about the seasons going by and you are waiting for your prince i think it should be called " waiting by the seasons"


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