A title please and a review?

Sweet summer's dew,


Crisp Autumn air,


Soft snow of winter


Beauty of Spring,


Where shall I find you


On this Halloween?





In the dusk of light


Or colors of sunsets


Shall you await me


My noble prince?





Lift not my soul


With your song,


but include harmony


With every verse.





Let sorrow win the day


As stratus fills the heavens


With its own melody.





Note: stratus are a type of cloud that produces the drizzle of rain that last all day.

A title please and a review?
8/10 just because i prefer poems with stories, rather than descriptions.





For a title; "Season's Spectrum"? Or just take your favorite line from your poem and make it your title.
Reply:absolutely beautiful, very well written!


For a title~ how about A Season for Love
Reply:your poem is very pretty lol nice name
Reply:the stanzas don't really fit. your point seems to change threwout, the 1st is what will the weather be on halloween, 2nd: will my prince meet me on halloween 3rd: kinda confusing, mabey change the last line to "everywhere in life"? 4th: sorrow. if you're not palning on editing it, a good generic title would be "music of the seasons"