Monday, May 17, 2010

My new poem, don't steal it, is a copyright.?

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Have you seen my roses?


Have you seen the winter pass?


I see the days gone fast as wild horses


That runs in the sweet green grass.





The spring brought lilies


Dozens of red roses bloomed,


I see the kids laughing so silly


That painful winter has gone so soon.





That summer was intense


As fire in a forest,


The rumors of love that comes from my neighbor’s fence


I fell in love with the son of a florist.





My love has gone last fall


He died of a broken-heart


Alone I started to bawl


Screaming is my entire fault until I broke apart.





Winter has come by


To console as I watched his grave


I never saw the roses like before, oh my!


My roses aren’t like he to me gave.





Have you seen my roses?


Have you seen the winter pass?


Is this the martyr that my life exposes?


No wonder, my life will never last.





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My new poem, don't steal it, is a copyright.?
Sweet Jesus!!! Beautiful, not only a poem, but a tragic love story as well. Nicely done!!! Brava!!!
Reply:It is a really good poem! It tells a great story and builds an image in your mind! It's awesome!
Reply:This poem is awesome. If this poem is yours then it's automatically copyrighted even if you don't register it.





Below is the copyright law in Canada. I'm not sure where you live but you could google Copyright law and enter the country u live in.
Reply:it's a lovely poem
Reply:it's "cute"
Reply:Very touching and very original. I love the way the seasons pass. and I can feel the things happening you describe. I love it. You truly are the daughter of the moon.


Eeyore
Reply:I love it....it have a very important meaning.

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