Is this poem good to give to a girl I like?

I wrote this poem for a girl I like, and she knows I like her.


I am planning on giving it to her today just wondering if this poem has too much feeling and will scare her off.





For Stacy.








Sweet as honey on a cold winter day.





Taunting my heart, please don't keep it at bay.





Always your smile, it makes my day.





Could this real, I hope it may.





Yearning for an answer, what will you say?








JLN.








By the way, im in the 8th grade. I thought it up over the night.

Is this poem good to give to a girl I like?
Sounds good man.





Good luck, I hope it all works out for ya.
Reply:roses are red,violets blue, I don't wanna play games, I wanna @#$!you
Reply:omg, i'm in 11th and i think i just feel in luv!! j/k but she def, will!! its lovely
Reply:Sounds Great!
Reply:very nice
Reply:You have talent and potential. Correct the fourth line to "Could this BE real", and fifth line to "I yearn for an answer", and we have a winner! Keep writing, and any girl would be happy to receive such a beautiful poem.
Reply:Honey is sweet, yes- but aaah, there is NOTHING SWEETER- than honey on a cold winter's day! I mean, you come in out of the cold, and there that honey is, ready for your unsweetened mouth- made even MORE sour by . . . The cold winter?
Reply:Sweet as honey on a cold winter day
Reply:give it to her with a rose but nothing else.
Reply:If she likes poems then you're in luck
Reply:Its a very good poem. and for an 8th grader, it is excellent. I am sure the girl will like it. And if she doesn't she is not worthy of you.
Reply:Yes, it is a good sweet poem. However, only give it to her if she likes poems and this cute kind of attention. Not all people prefer this. You have to discover what her love language is first.
Reply:I rate it 10/10 cool,nyc sweet and lovely she'll definitly lyk it it





Take care
Reply:sounds great i think she will like it
Reply:awh thats cute.She will like it.
Reply:it's OK,
Reply:it's so sweet!! just fix this line......."Could this real, I hope it may." you need to add the word "be".
Reply:it is o.k. i think u should wrote was on ur heart something that she like
Reply:yeah :D





very nice.
Reply:I think it is very sweet. I hope she is pleased and re-acts as you hope she will. Good luck
Reply:aaaaw...being a writer myself, i think it's really good. it's short, sincere and sweet. if this doesn't give her the good tingles, i don't know what would.