Here is number five, a love poem. Comments?

silently





When you lay down your headto sleep for the night.


I'm completely blown away, an angel in my sight.


Your soft gentle touch, and magic velvety skin,


Makes me feel whole, a real man once again.





Lying by your side on a cold winters night,


Kissing and cuddling by sweet candle light.


Never closer to heaven, could a man ever be,


Than to be lying together, in loves ecstacy.





How I ever got so lucky, I haven't got a clue,


When suddenly appeared, an angel, thats you.


Sweet cherry kisses, intoxicating like wine,


I should have know it, God sent me a sign.





When I first met you, a full moon for love,


The rest has gone together, hand into glove.


I take you my love, for the rest of our lives,


Finally time for me , to get rid of my knives.





You rescued me angel from a horrible fate,


No one should find anyone, dead in that state.


Your love and your kindness, showed me the way,


All that is left is to pick the home where'll we stay.

Here is number five, a love poem. Comments?
Since I have been reading and commenting on the art of all the others, by far your poem is at the top. So much feeling, you have a keen insight of your emotions. The smoothness of the words floats in the air and into the readers soul. Put into the right places is everything. It all comes to an beautiful ending. I was simply amazed....."BLOWN AWAY" ! ! !


All the writers could learn alot from you. In fact you would be good person to help me comment on all these writers. My goal is to help them reach the point to where you are at and someday reach to where I am at.


I forgot to mention that you are truely in touch with your emotions, knowing what is going through your heat in order to find just the right word to express it.
Reply:She is your Savior too. You express your endearment perfectly.
Reply:Wow you really know how to write great poems.Your poems take the breath away from the readers as they are so full of passion, lol
Reply:it makes me sick. lovesick.
Reply:i dont like love poems. you should try to think of a new way to say things. like compare the person you love to something really different. it is very unoriginal to just say how much you love someone. i am not being mean. i am giving you, in my opinion, advice.it could be good.
Reply:*sighhhhhhhh* this is with no doubt the most breathtaking love poem I have ever read in my life. I can feel the love in this poem, amazing!!! I adore the term that you use when you met the angel: under a full moon of love. Bravo!!!! my love. Love you.





Marilyn (your angel of San Juan and muse)
Reply:I'm jealous of who ever found you!!! I can only dream of my husband saying those things to me or even about me...
Reply:wow. that's really haunting. thumbs up!
Reply:omg! I love that poem. I am so gald that you feelw so much love towards a woamn named Marylin that you write her so many poems. I hope that you show her all of these because sh ewould love them, garanteed. Alot of people dont show how much they love someone, but you certianly do. That is good. Well, hope you have a good life ahead of you than your past held. Bye!!