And what do you think of this one...............????????

Life is lonesome as ever,


hues of spring, are black %26amp; white as ever!


of the past relationship, left are no residues,


through the seasons, the search for him still continues!


In the balmy summers,


loneliness whistles,


refills up my reverie.


Sometime in this summer time,


will he think of me?


Monsoons are romantic season,


being drenched in love, is the reason!


Being weather-beaten, it seems obnoxious,


I tend to become very fastidous!!


My sleep exists to be transient,


like this, life was not to be meant!


My common sense tending to zero,


%26amp; absence tending to infinity,


I need to trespass into sanctity!!





Not yet over, is the gloom of autumn,


%26amp; the chilly winters are creeping from bottom!


Dried are, the foliage of pine,


Oh! Heaven, will you ever shine?


The pitch black winter nights,


are obtrusive %26amp; quite,


darkness everywhere,


not a single stream of light!


In all seasons, I'm bewildered,


gazing at weeping nightingles,


%26amp; listening to,


grudging woodpecker's jingles!Just waiting for,


Sweet love springs,


Sunny summers %26amp; Winsome winters.


Maelstrom monsoons,


%26amp; Overwhelming autumns.


My love, won't wither away with the weather,


in all the seasons, I'm lovelorn,


though I'm forlorn,My love is not "Seasonal",


that'll come %26amp; go away,


My love is "Season",


which will forever stay

And what do you think of this one...............????????
Nice poem... a little lengthy tho for here
Reply:too lengthy to read
Reply:Darshana, that was beautuful, sad, yet with hopes of joy I really liked it. You have a great talent!
Reply:love can change .


love is like energy it can not be created nor destroyed but it can be converted.


try to convert it.
Reply:Sooooooo Romantic
Reply:ewWw it's looonnggg!! i rather read dr.suess
Reply:Nice.
Reply:DO NOT GET FRUSTATED, DON'T EASILY DISGUSTED.I KNOW HARD TO PLEASE YOUR SELF.


SPENDING TIME AND MANY A SEASONS PASSING BY.


I AMURE A DY WILL COME, THE HAPINESS WILL COME , PEACEFUL DAYS COME, AM CERTAIN GOOD DAYS COME GREETING YOU .YOUR WAITING WILL HAVE TO STOP AND THE DAYS MEMORBLE.YOU LOVE HIM .NOW YOU LOVE GOD.He will be pleased and bless you .you will be peaceful .Tell me just your date on which you were born .God will reveal the HAPPINESS TO COME TO YOU
Reply:seriously long...
Reply:I really like it. I could never wright anything like that, you are very clever, true.
Reply:i like it.


my fave stanza: Monsoons are romantic season,


being drenched in love, is the reason





what a great metaphor for someones unending love....a monsoon.
Reply:sad
Reply:I read like one line I dislike reading SOOOOO much!
Reply:pATIENCE IS AN ART!!!
Reply:Nice...





To be honest, I didnt read it !
Reply:good one
Reply:that was very good
Reply:I have no words to share...........the first 10lines are like...........too good...keep it up...im actually loving it!!!





Have u written this all by urself????????????








can i say its true but truth





can i say its everything but not all!!!!!!!!!!!11111





Star for u!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!...
Reply:oh dear its so sad and yet so touching.......


lovely poem...
Reply:it sounds really good!!! :)